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Hi! Thanks so much for doing this. I am planning to apply early this year to a Liberal Arts college near LA.

I was thinking to do an essay about how failure shaped you. I was thinking to do it about how I was supposed to give my autistic brother a bath while my parents were gone, and all the trials and tribulations that went with it (him running out to the street, me having to hold him down so he wouldn't run away) and how it made me realize that sometimes things are out of our control.

I've got about half of it done and my guidance counselor has told me the whole shabang about showing and not telling, etc. Do you have any other advice?